This is a book about Matilda. She is so smart and likes to read the books. She is so poor, because she is smart, but her parents hates Matilda. They were like jealous, and sometimes they were so angry because she is smart, and doesn't like to do what parents wants to do to her daughter. I don't get why her parents are so angry at her. If their kids are smart, then parents should be happy with that. I want everybody who I know to read this book.
Nice post DongWook! I really liked how you described Matilda's personality. I didn't get when you said, "she is so poor, because she is smart.", wouldn't a smart person be very rich? One thing you might want to add is a picture of the book cover, other than that, nice job!
ReplyDeleteyou are wrote well, but the I think the problem is that you need to tell write specific about her description. For example, I don't get what you mean by "she is so poor, because she is smart.", I think you need to tell specific why they are, who they are and things like that. If you correct this, you'll be perfect!! You also did nice job on yours.
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